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Harriate-L-Riddle
Number of posts : 1706 Age : 34 Location : Anywhere i can live. House : Slytherin Year : 7th Registration date : 2007-07-26
Character Name: Harriate Riddle Health: (60/100) Order/ Death Eater/ Da: Confused
| Subject: Lovers Death Wed Aug 22, 2007 5:13 pm | |
| ((more like a song about an rp))
he was the one man My heart ever yearned for His smile lit my heart His arms safe and secure But now within this office I feel my heart break As i'm told that he is gone Dead, killed by my 'father'
*chorus* Lovers Death My only love in all the world His eyes are glazed Forever closed My 'father' arrested For the murder of love As i stand on the edge of the cliff Lost and alone again.
And now as i stand infront of this Gravestone I feel the damn break As the tears roll down my face. Crashing down onto my knees With a broken heart I look at his grave His final resting place.
*chorus*
So what do i do now? Where do i go? Do i save my 'father'? Or avenge my love? And as my father is dragged away i know what i must do So up i stand to take the blame Lies slip past my lips so easily with any luck my 'father' will be free and i'll be jailed for all etenrity
*chorus*
So this is the end I've lost everyone my 'Father' free my love dead my 'aunty' hates me my secret, feeling betrayed as i stand here now telling you of all the loss of love the loss of life My Loss My Lovers Death
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Charles Monroe
Number of posts : 342 Age : 32 Location : Unknown House : Gryffindor Year : 5th Registration date : 2007-08-15
Character Name: Health: (0/0) Order/ Death Eater/ Da:
| Subject: Re: Lovers Death Wed Aug 22, 2007 8:34 pm | |
| wow amazing, your good at writing okie like it even more now | |
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Pandora Gryffindor Admin
Number of posts : 519 Age : 49 Location : Godrics Hollow with Remus House : Gryffindor Year : Headmistress/Potions Prof./Order Member Registration date : 2007-07-27
Character Name: Pandora Gryffindor Health: (100/100) Order/ Death Eater/ Da: Order
| Subject: Re: Lovers Death Wed Aug 22, 2007 8:44 pm | |
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Jasmine Granger
Number of posts : 3093 Age : 36 Location : Slytherin Dungeons/Jasmine's Apartment/Wolf Demon Temple House : Slytherin Registration date : 2007-07-26
Character Name: Jasmine Elizabeth Granger Health: (15/100) Order/ Death Eater/ Da: Death Eater/ Wolf Demon
| Subject: Re: Lovers Death Thu Aug 23, 2007 4:36 am | |
| It's so beautiful, passionate, emotional, poetic, and sad. It brought tears to my eyes. I loved it, Harriate. You are such a good writer. | |
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Harriate-L-Riddle
Number of posts : 1706 Age : 34 Location : Anywhere i can live. House : Slytherin Year : 7th Registration date : 2007-07-26
Character Name: Harriate Riddle Health: (60/100) Order/ Death Eater/ Da: Confused
| Subject: Re: Lovers Death Thu Aug 23, 2007 1:36 pm | |
| Thanks.lol. made me cry to. | |
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Annabelle lestrange
Number of posts : 494 Age : 32 Location : England House : Slytherin Registration date : 2007-07-26
Character Name: Annabelle Lestrange Health: (60/100) Order/ Death Eater/ Da: Death eater
| Subject: Re: Lovers Death Thu Aug 23, 2007 3:08 pm | |
| Woaaaah that was beautifull. I agree with Jasmine. It made me cry. It really powerfull and emotional. Well done. | |
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Harriate-L-Riddle
Number of posts : 1706 Age : 34 Location : Anywhere i can live. House : Slytherin Year : 7th Registration date : 2007-07-26
Character Name: Harriate Riddle Health: (60/100) Order/ Death Eater/ Da: Confused
| Subject: Re: Lovers Death Thu Aug 23, 2007 3:12 pm | |
| Thanks.lol. First song ive done with no rhyming in mind.lol. Not one of my favs though | |
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Rose-Quattro
Number of posts : 1349 Location : The Swallows, Llagollen (Wales) or Hogwarts... House : Ravenclaw Year : 5th Registration date : 2007-08-19
Character Name: Rose Ligeia Quattromini Health: (17/100) Order/ Death Eater/ Da: I haven't decided yet.
| Subject: Re: Lovers Death Thu Aug 23, 2007 5:05 pm | |
| It's pretty good...me likey! Thay were right when they told me you were good at writing! | |
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