The unexpected turn out-By Bailey Rose and Brooke Dumbledore

[color=orange]A monster swiped past Bailey, she buried her head into her pillow, and screamed. No one could hear her, no one. She screamed louder, this time out of the pillow, but it seemed that she was alone. Her and that terrible dementor. It came closer to her, and all of the sudden she felt as if the life was getting sucked out of her. It went cold, dark and she couldn’t breathe. Bailey tried to get her wand out of her pocket but she was too late. The life of her was getting sucked out her. Darker and darker it went, until finally, it was black.Bailey then woke up, panting. She quickly got up and moved across to the stairs, and made her way up slowly to her dormitory. She quietly walked over to her bed, which was in the corner by the window. She put her blanket, which she was carrying, on her bed, and made her way over to the windowsill and sat down, burring her head into her knees. It wasn’t the first time she had that dream, in fact it was the 5th time. She closed her eyes for a second, and suddenly, she heard a noise coming from one of the other Slytherin girls’ bed. Bailey looked up and saw that it was one of her best friends, Jasmine Granger. Jasmine made her way up to Bailey and sat down next to her.“Are you ok, Bailey?” Jasmine had asked Bailey. Bailey smiled at Jasmine.“I’m fine,” Bailey said, standing up.I think, I’m going to go for a walk,” Bailey quickly added, before leaving the room. She grabbed her jacket, and walked down the stairs. She made her way out of the common room, and walked through the dungeons. She got out her wand and whispered, ‘lumos’ and the tip of her wand went bright, and she light again. She walked slowly around the corridors, until she bumped into somebody. It was her best friend, Brookelyn (Brooke) Dumbledore.Oh, it’s you,” Bailey said, sighing in relieve.“What’s that suppose to mean?” Brooke asked, raising an eyebrow.“I thought you were a teacher,” Bailey explained. Brooke laughed,“Yea, well I’m defiantly not a teacher,” Brooke replied, hugging Bailey, so tight she couldn’t breathe. Bailey laughed and asked,“Where are you off to then?” Brooke stopped smiling, and looked serious for a first. “Promise not to tell anyone Bailey, not even Pansy Parkinson?” Brooke asked.“I promise,” Bailey replied looking at Brooke.“I’m going to the forbidden forest, to deal with somebody,” Brooke replied, looking as if she was going to start to cry.“Oh… Who?” Bailey asked.“Bellatrix Lestrange,” Brooke replied looking down. Bailey gasped and took hold of Brooke.“She will kill you! I’m coming with you, and you’re not to say no!” Bailey stated, and grabbed her arm, and they started to walk fast towards the entrance door.When they reached the door, Brooke opened the doors, and they both walked out, quickly, but silently. They made there way up to the forest, when suddenly they were hit by a curse, they fell over. Bailey hit her head on the rock that was beside them, and she blacked out, Brooke however saw that one of her friends hit them, Levanna Williams. She also saw Bellatrix Lestrange was pointing her wand at them too, so she knew that Levanna was protecting them, then Brooke stopped breathing.Brooke gasped for air clutching Bailey’s sweaty hand her heart beating firmly in her chest "Bailey ... Are you alright? You’re not hurt are you? “She said panicking and praying that her best friend was all right
"I’m fine ...I’m breathing" Bailey replied breathless and waking up. The cut on her forehead bleeding violently. A trickle of sweat dripped down Brooke's face down to her drenched shirt, Bailey stood up and strode over to a tree And had a strong brave look in her face she turned to Brooke and gave an alarmed Look,[color:7279=#2d2d2d:7279]"Where’s Levanna?” She said, looking around. Brooke's eyes widened as she got up from where she was sitting and looked around searching for any sign of there friend but quickly ducked down as she heard a twig break and behind a large oak tree stood a Bonny women with thick curly hair, her eyes a deep green and focused on the trees around them and her frail body gliding across the damp hard ground,Come on girls... come out and play,” she said smirking. Bellatrix was not one of Brooke’s or Bailey’s favorite people but in a way she was kind of glad it was not the dark lord himself. Brooke crouched down beside bailey trying not to make a noise, but it was to late, Bailey had shifted her weight onto Brooke and she had fallen over. Bellatrix’s attention snapped over to the tree, where the two were hiding behind.
“Leave them alone Bellatrix!” Levanna strode up to Bellatrix bravely, her head held up high and her shoulders thrown back. Bellatrix smirked at her,
[color=#2d2d2d]“Or what?” Levanna raised her wand bravely and whispered to Bailey and Brooke,“Everything will be all right” and with that, Levanna pointed her wand to Bellatrix.“Let us go now!" Levanna said. Brooke and Bailey started to run, sprinting towards the castle, a flash of green shone behind them and they heard a slight scream. They turned around and they didn’t see Bellatrix’s body lying there, but they saw Levannas’... It was still and motionless her hair flung to each side and her eyes closed.“LEVANNA!” Brooke screamed tears streaming down her plump checks,“No Levanna you can’t die LEVANNA!"
Bellatrix stood there and smirked. Bailey got out her wand and pointed it at her, quickly she said,"Advarda Kadabra!” and a flash of green light hit Bellatrix right on the nose and she fell back dead.
[color:7279=#2d2d2d:7279]Brooke gasped and looked at Bailey surprised.Bailey pulled Brooke over her shoulder and started running towards the castle, tears streaming down her face. She knew it was a time to grave for her friend, and deal with the consequences, but they had to get to safety first... with or with out Levanna.


This was written by me, but some of the text is Brooke's. When it gets to "Brooke grabbed Bailey's arm" up to "LEVANNA!" So thanks, Brooke. Please leave a comment.

OMG! sorry guys, didn't quite come out the right colour! Sorry. and sorry for double posting guys. Just wanted to say sorry, and just highlight the words.

i like it,it covered all the points,nice going

Thanks:P

Hey, is that picture you? If so, your really pretty, it's good!

It was cute but, some parts were a little hard to read.

Thanks for the comments:) The writting didn't come out right:( sorry

woooah thats good. You describe what happens AMAZINGLY CLEAR!!!! Well done!